I am a Year 4 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Alicia. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Kharli, Great to see that you have a blog post up. I enjoyed the comic strip and all the effort you have put into selecting illustrations and characters to present your work. I noticed that the last picture didn't have any writing? What did you plan to write for this one?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Kharli,
ReplyDeleteGreat to see that you have a blog post up. I enjoyed the comic strip and all the effort you have put into selecting illustrations and characters to present your work. I noticed that the last picture didn't have any writing? What did you plan to write for this one?